RE: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5458 (1746)

[<H.Cruickshank@surrey.ac.uk>]

 Hi again,

I suggest to add the the TS Logical Channel definition (taken from RFC
4326). So here is the proposed text:

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TS Logical Channel: Transport Stream Logical Channel. In this document,
this term identifies a channel at the MPEG-2 level [ISO-MPEG2]. It
exists at level 2 of the ISO/OSI reference model. All packets sent over
a TS Logical Channel carry the same PID value (this value is unique
within a specific TS Multiplex). The term "Stream" is defined in MPEG-2
[ISO-MPEG2] to describe the content carried by a specific TS Logical
Channel (see ULE Stream). Some PID values are reserved (by MPEG-2) for
specific signalling. Other standards (e.g., ATSC, DVB) also reserve
specific PID values.

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Subject: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5458 (1746)


The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5458, "Security
Requirements for the Unidirectional Lightweight Encapsulation (ULE)
Protocol".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5458&eid=1746

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Type: Technical
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: 2

Original Text
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[[ at the bottom of page 5 / top of page 6 ]]

   TS: Transport Stream [ISO-MPEG2].  A method of transmission at the
   MPEG-2 layer using TS Packets; it represents Layer 2 of the ISO/OSI
   reference model.  See also TS Logical Channel and TS Multiplex.
                              ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

<< page break >>

   TS Multiplex: In this document, ...



Corrected Text
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   TS: Transport Stream [ISO-MPEG2].  A method of transmission at the
   MPEG-2 layer using TS Packets; it represents Layer 2 of the ISO/OSI
   reference model.  See also TS Logical Channel and TS Multiplex.
|
|  TS Logical Channel: ...   << to be filled in >>
|  ...

   TS Multiplex: In this document, ...




Notes
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The quoted keyword explanation for "TS Logical Channel" 
is missing in Section 2.

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  Please restore the entry and fill in the missing Corrected Text.

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RFC5458 (draft-ietf-ipdvb-sec-req-09)
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Title               : Security Requirements for the Unidirectional
Lightweight Encapsulation (ULE) Protocol
Publication Date    : March 2009
Author(s)           : H. Cruickshank, P. Pillai, M. Noisternig, S.
Iyengar
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : IP over DVB
Area                : Internet
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG